Sharing My Recent Poetry | my first snowglobe

This is the latest poem I have written, and I am quite happy with the way it turned out. I want to use this blog to also showcase my work, and I am hoping this will inspire you to keep writing, and also to provide feedback on my posts. Please let me know what you think!

my first snow globe

i grasp my souvenir

of the perfect world i once lived in,

cupping my hand,

around the fragile glass.

gently, i shake my snow globe,

creating my own haphazard storm.

i look carefully,

at my warped reflection,

dancing around with the snow.

how would it feel,

to live in a snow globe?

to walk around,

endlessly, in circles.

letting the snowflakes fall

delicately on my tongue.

not another care,

in the cold, brutal world.

i note the way the background dilates,

as i peer through the glass.

i shake the globe vigorously once more,

and slide out of my palm.

it shatters on the wooden floor,

along with my dreams.

i never got a snow globe again.

Thank you guys for reading this, I really appreciate it. Please comment what you think about it and if there is a way I can improve my poetry. Finally, don't forget to enter the Student Writing Feature, starting this Sunday! More information is on my home page.